Film Pitch Feedback

This is our film pitch for our film 'The Last Adventure'.

The feedback we received from one of our peers on this presentation was that is was a very relevant narrative for the genre and that it was very interesting, she rated us 9/10 for this.
Our teacher said that our main character Stacey should maybe be a bit younger, we agreed with this and have decided to change her age from 18 to 16. We were told that the rest of our characters are well casted. We were rated 8/10 for this. One of our peers however said that all of the characters personalities fit well together.
We were told that our enigma code was really good, the audience wants to know what her special wish is, we were rated 9/10 for this.
Our teacher said that our narrative was very suitable for our target audience and that we created escapism. We were told that the quote on the film poster will help attract the audience. She rated us 9/10 for this part of the presentation.
Our teacher said that our narrative was lovely and that with the stay at home target audience it is easier to manipulate their emotions. We were rated  9/10 for this as well.
Our teacher said that our film is different with a teen twist and for this we received 8/10.
Our peer said that our marketing ideas were extremely well thought out and she marked us 8/10 for this.
Overall we received 60 out of 70, we as a group were very happy with this result but we have thought out ways to improve on our film.